Tuesday, October 2, 2018

First Chapter of My New Romantic Suspense Second Look!

I cannot wait to share this story with you all next month! Here's the first chapter to give you a little peek at what's happening in Nate's life and what Griffin Force is up to!

Second Look

Chapter One
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Nate Hughes stared into the six-foot-wide and ten-foot-long prison cell that had once housed Mahmoud Atwah. The yellowish paint on the walls had chipped away in places, and the tiny window covered in metal mesh didn't provide enough sunlight to even make shadows on the floor. One corner held a plastic desk, the other a metal toilet. The bed Atwah would have slept in was empty, and the lack of personal effects was glaring. The cell looked like it had been cleaned and was ready for its next occupant, but Atwah should have still been inside. He’d once been dubbed “The Ghost” and he'd used his skill to disappear.

But how had he done it?

Nate looked down the hall. Every inch of the prison seemed surrounded by CCTV cameras. No one could force an entry. To even get into Belmarsh prison there were fifteen gated doors and a fingerprint check. Then, to be allowed inside this high-security unit where Atwah had been held, every person, including the guards, was subjected to a metal detector and body search, another gated door, and then facial recognition. There was no way Atwah could have escaped. And yet he had.

Nate slowly entered the cell, looking for anything irregular. As sparsely furnished as it was, everything was in its place. There was no dust. The bed, which was little more than a cot, was neatly made. He checked under the mattress. Nothing. Not a picture or a scrap of paper. Since a chair wasn't provided, this bed had been where Atwah had spent the majority of his time.

Pulling the cot partially away from the wall, Nate noticed a small, discolored spot in the corner, just below where Atwah's head would have been if he’d had a pillow. On closer inspection, Nate could see the spot was actually three small numbers about a half an inch in height. Was that a four? Then maybe two ones?

Nate pulled the bed to the center of the room and crouched down by the wall to take a closer look. The numbers were a rusty brown, and the last one was smudged. Were they written in blood?

“Find something interesting?"

The woman’s voice cut through the quiet and jolted him out of his musing. He steeled himself from visibly reacting and instead calmly stood and turned to face her. She had taken a step inside the cell, and was watching him expectantly.

“Is there some code of silence no one told me about?” she finally said, as she brushed by him with a little huff of what sounded like repressed laughter.

Nate drew his brows together and watched her squat down in the spot he had moments ago. Her relaxed, but obvious, air of authority, the tight, no-nonsense bun on top of her head, and basic black tactical pants easily marked her as someone in the intelligence or military community. But her slight southern accent and straightforward manner reminded him of his Aunt Sue. She was also a very direct woman— only Aunt Sue wouldn’t look as good in combat boots.

He watched as the woman frowned and bent closer to the wall. Was there something wrong? He didn’t voice his question. Not yet. Even though she’d joked about his silence, sometimes it helped collect information because the focus was less on talking and more on observation. And Aunt Sue always said, if you don’t know what to say, just listen.

But she wasn’t talking anymore either, merely looking at the numbers on Atwah’s wall as though they’d switch positions if she looked away.

It was time to speak up. “I don’t think you understand the rules of the quiet game,” he said, closing the distance between them. “But since you’ve already lost, I’ll go ahead and introduce myself. I'm Nate Hughes, with Griffin Force. And you are?”

“I think the rules give you one pass when you walk into a game without knowing, so wouldn’t that make me the winner?” She straightened and walked over to the desk. After inspecting each corner and underneath it, she easily pulled the small piece of furniture away from the wall and examined every inch behind it. By the deepening frown on her face when she finally faced him, he knew she hadn’t found anything.

“No, the only rule is sneezing doesn’t count. So I’m still the reigning champion as far as you know.” He smiled and held out his hand expectantly. “Like I said, I’m Nate.”

“Abby.” She shook his hand and gave him a quick once-over and a smile. “Forgive me for not realizing I was in the presence of quiet-game royalty.” She motioned toward the numbers on the wall. “Since you’ve had a bit more time to contemplate the evidence, do you have any thoughts on what 411 means?" she asked, folding her arms and leaning her hip against the desk.

He liked her. She had the military edge, but balanced it with easygoing charm. Not many intelligence officers could pull that off. “Could be a lot of things. Maybe Atwah picked up some American slang and was looking for information. Maybe it’s a date or how many days he'd been at Belmarsh.”

Abby immediately shook her head. “No, he’d been here for 389 days.” She said it fast and confidently, as if she were the front row teacher’s pet answering a question.

“What do you think the number stands for, then?” Nate narrowed his gaze, trying to get a read on her. She wasn’t giving anything away in body language or facial expression.

Definitely in intelligence, he thought.

She didn’t answer immediately, and he could feel her pulling away. “Like you said, it could mean a lot of things." She brushed her hands together and started for the door, putting distance between them.

What had happened? Had he said something?

Nate matched her pace. “Where are we going next?”

Abby didn’t slow down or meet his eye as she left the cell. “I’m going to the exercise yard. And don’t feel like you have to escort me. I can find my way.”

“I don’t mind. I was headed there myself.” He didn’t want to let the easy rapport they’d had from the beginning slip away. And she might have a fresh perspective on the case. “As a fellow investigator, I have to ask, is that a Southern accent I detect? My gram is from Charleston.” The longer he’d listened, the more he’d bet good money that Abby was from the Southern United States. Her accent was faint, but still there.

“My, my, aren't you a curious one?” Abby gave him a speculative glance. “Where are you from, Nate? Are you a Charleston native, as well?”

“No. My mom was from South Carolina, but she married a Canadian, and they settled in Toronto. I grew up there.” They walked down the short hall, the fluorescent lights above them casting a glaring white glow over the floors and walls.

She gave him a decisive nod, as if a puzzle piece had clicked into place. “That makes more sense.”

“What makes sense?” Nate asked. She hadn’t slowed down at all and walked with a purpose while keeping their conversation short and to the point. She was a practical woman on a mission, and he couldn’t take his eyes off her.

“Your polite introduction. I don’t get that a lot in this business.” She looked him in the eye, and her smile was back, albeit a brief one. “You surprised me, and that doesn’t happen often, either.”

Nate’s pulse sped up a bit. He liked the way she looked at him, as if she’d seen his potential and believed he could live up to it. He’d love to surprise her again just to see that look one more time, but Abby had quickened her pace after her comment. Did she feel awkward about her straightforwardness?

Nate lengthened his stride until his steps matched hers again. She’d surprised him, too. Now he really wanted to know who she worked for and regretted not pressing her about that earlier. But when they got to the exercise yard, she didn’t give him the chance to remedy that. Abby immediately began to walk the perimeter, looking up at the metal mesh that covered what served as the roof. He stayed at her side, and a guard from the prison joined them.

She acknowledged the guard with a nod. “Was Atwah in solitary or was he allowed any associations?” Abby asked him, keeping her tone casual while she scrutinized the mesh roof as if it held the secrets to the case.

“He’d been in the segregation unit for a week, but before that, he was categorized as ‘exceptional risk’ and not allowed to mix with anyone but guards.” The man grimaced, as if that had been distasteful. “In segregation, though, he’d get twenty-three hours in his cell and one hour in the yard to walk around, and he wasn’t pleased. We were all breathing a sigh of relief that he was going to be transferred to the specialized isolation unit in Frankland Prison.” The guard followed Abby’s gaze to the mesh, his brows drawn together as if trying to figure out what she was looking at.

“Why were you looking forward to his transfer? Were there problems guarding him?” Abby glanced over at him briefly before moving to the nearest wall and looking it up and down.

The guard shifted nervously. “We see a lot of prisoners here, and we’re trained to spot manipulation and conditioning. But Atwah didn’t even have to speak to give you the feeling that he’d kill you and your family if he had the chance. There was something about his eyes. They were so empty and dark. Like he was looking right through you.” The guard shook his head. “When he did talk, it was always about how it felt to be part of a greater good. That joining the fight against the Great Satan was an honor and a privilege. I let all that roll off my back, but when he started describing how some women and children had been maimed during his attacks, and it was a mercy to kill them, he got to me.” He hung his head. “No training prepares you for that.”

Abby turned her complete attention to him. “Why did you continue to work in his unit if his crimes bothered you? You could have asked for a transfer.”

“The pay is higher here,” he admitted. “I handled him all right, but reading about his crimes is different than being in the same room listening to him gloating about them.” The guard faced her, blocking her path so she couldn’t move away. “But no matter how I felt, if there’s anything I can do to help recapture him, I will.”

“You think he’s escaped from the entire complex, then?” Abby tilted her head and watched the guard closely. Even Nate leaned in to hear his answer.

“He can’t still be here. There aren’t many places to hide at Belmarsh.” The guard shifted from foot to foot, but kept his eyes on Abby.

“How could someone just walk out of a high security prison? Even he couldn’t have done it without help.” Abby said the words softly, as if she were tiptoeing through a minefield and didn’t want to set anything off.

But Nate was standing close enough that he could feel tension radiating from Abby and knew she was trying to elicit a reaction from the guard. Nate watched the man for any movement. More often than not, someone’s body language would give away what they didn’t want to say. The guard shuffled his feet, subconsciously putting some distance between them. He definitely seemed more nervous with every question.

“I don’t know anyone that would help him.” The guard backed up a step, and Abby followed, closing the distance between them.

“The way he talked about his crimes bothered you, and you were glad to see him being transferred.” She held up two fingers and continued counting off her points. “You were looking forward to him being gone from here, in fact. And you’re sure he’s escaped from the complex, not merely hiding.” All five fingers on her hand accused him.

The guard’s eyes were wide now. “You don’t think I had anything to do with any of this, do you?” He backed up another step.

“What’s your name?” Abby asked quietly, but firmly. She wasn’t leaving without an answer.

“Grant Pillings.” He took a breath and pointed to his ID badge. “You can check my background. I don’t know anything about his escape.”

“We’ll make a note of that, Officer Pillings.” Nate stepped forward. “Make sure your supervisor knows where we can find you if we have any more questions.”

Pillings lips were pinched together in a frown, but he didn’t say anything more, only gave Nate a brief bob of his head.

Abby started back toward the entrance and Pillings quickly got out of her way. He didn’t bother following her.

Nate, however, matched her stride once more, wishing he could read her mind. “What are you thinking?”

Abby glanced at him. “Atwah never leaves evidence behind. He’s a ghost. It took years to capture him because he didn’t leave a trail.” She smoothed the sides of her hair back. The small breeze in the exercise yard had produced a few flyaways that were getting in her face. “Those numbers behind the bed aren’t just a coincidence. Atwah wanted us to find them.”

“Agreed.” Nate watched the guard stare at them from the doorway. He clearly wasn’t pleased with Abby’s insinuations. “Do you really think Officer Pillings is involved?”

“Everyone here is a suspect at the moment, wouldn’t you say?” She stopped at the far end of the exercise yard and looked up at the sky. “Nazer attempted to break him out of here using a helo, and failed. This is one of the highest security prisons in the world and three days after the escape attempt, Atwah vanishes. He had to have inside help. What have they found so far?”

“I haven’t gotten the latest updates, but the world’s best security and intelligence people are on it, so I’m sure they’ll figure it out.” He stood next to her and glanced up, but his eyes quickly returned to her. “Maybe 411 is a code of some sort. Initials, perhaps.” But that didn’t sit right with Nate. “The numbers look written in blood, and since he was in isolation, it was his own. I would think that makes the message more significant.”

Abby looked him full in the face, and her eyes lit with appreciation. “I agree.” She started walking back toward the entrance to the prison cells. “Now we just have to figure out what it does mean.”

They walked back toward Atwah’s cell, the halls empty and their footsteps echoing hollowly. The other prisoner who had been housed here was moved the moment Atwah was found missing. Just two prisoners in the entire wing and one had escaped. It was hard to fathom, though he’d seen the unoccupied cell with his own eyes.

When they neared the guard station at the far end of the hall, Colt Mitchell, the new head of the Griffin Force, strode toward them. He eyed Abby curiously, then stuck out his hand. “I’m Captain Mitchell.”

“Abby Caldwell,” she said as she gave him a firm handshake.

Nate quickly committed her last name to memory. She hadn’t given up very many details about herself, and he wanted to remember every last one.

“I haven’t heard an American accent for a while. Are you one of Rick Porter’s people?” Colt asked.

Porter was the CIA station chief here in London. Nate had only met him once, and all he could recall about the man was that he’d had brown hair and brown eyes. Nothing stood out. Which was probably good for a CIA guy.

Abby nodded, but the skin around her eyes tightened— almost imperceptibly, but Nate was watching her so close, he noticed. Did she not like working for Porter?

“Porter’s a good man to work for.” Colt hadn’t waited for her response, but Nate would have liked to hear if Abby had anything to say. Instead, Colt turned to Nate. “Did you find anything?”

“Three numbers written in blood on the wall of his cell. 411.” Nate gestured toward Abby. “We were just discussing what they could mean.”

Several heads of intelligence were clustered a little farther down another hall, with Harry Barton, the new Chief at MI6, right in the middle of it. They were all looking at video footage on an iPad in Harry’s hand, which was strange. No devices were to have been allowed inside the prison. But when a collective gasp rose from those watching, it was obvious something was happening. Abby, Nate, and Colt looked at each other, then walked toward the group.

Harry spotted them and disengaged from the crowd to meet them halfway. “We’re just getting confirmation of four attacks.” He was breathless, as if he’d been running, but the expression on his face was all business. Nate knew that look. When the news was bad, every intelligence officer had a blank go-to look.

“What kind of attacks?” Colt asked, stepping closer to Harry.

Nate wanted details. Now. He didn’t want to wait for Harry to give a sanitized version without facts that MI6 wasn’t making public yet. He reached for his cell phone, but remembered he’d been required to give it to security. “Where?”

For a second Harry’s fists clenched and his control cracked. He looked stricken. “Suicide bombers. In the subway systems of London, Paris, New York, and Istanbul.” Harry’s eyes were bleak as he met Nate’s. “It’s bad. Hundred of people killed or injured. And since they all took place within a few minutes of each other, we believe they were coordinated.”

“Four coordinated attacks. In four countries that allied to fight ISIS.” Nate’s pulse started to pound. Another possible meaning for the bloody numbers in Atwah’s cell came to mind. 411. What if these attacks were a first wave, and there were two more coming? Bigger ones. Much bigger, if Atwah were directly involved. He looked at Abby. “Four. One. One.”

Anger and sadness flitted across Abby’s face before she was able to draw a curtain over her emotions. “It’s likely.” She took a breath and let it out slow. “We’ve definitely got work to do if we’re going to find Atwah before the next attack.”

“What do you mean?” Harry asked. Several people were trying to get his attention, but he held up a hand.

Abby looked at Colt, then Nate. “Atwah may have left us a clue as to what is coming. I’ll let Nate fill you in.”

She gave him a little wave before starting to walk away. Nate didn’t want to see her go so he reached out to touch her arm as she passed. The moment he did, a frisson of awareness flared through him from the point of contact. He pulled his hand back, trying to remember what he’d been about to say.

“Hey, we figured out the numbers. Why don’t we keep working on this case together? Porter won’t mind.” There was something about her that he couldn’t let go, and he wanted to know more.

“Working together. You and me.” She drew the words out as if she’d never considered the idea.

“Well, and Griffin Force. We’re working pretty closely with MI6, the CIA, CSIS, pretty much all of the alphabet soups.” He smiled, but Abby wasn’t looking at him. Her hands were clenched, and when she finally tilted her head up, their eyes locked. For just a moment her emotional defenses were down, and Nate could see a mountain of pain in their depths. It shook him and while he wanted to draw her close, comfort her somehow, he couldn’t. Instead, he stepped back.

Colt looked between them before he chimed in. “I can talk to Porter if you’d like, and we can start coordinating our efforts. The more heads we put together, the faster we can find Atwah.”

She pivoted away from Nate, and he could almost hear the blank look every CIA case officer perfected click into place on her face like a protector on a screen. He was proven right when she offered Colt a polite, neutral smile.

“Thanks for the offer, but I won’t be able to accept. I’ll let you know if that changes or if I need any help, Captain.” Without even a backward glance she melted into the crowd of intelligence heads demanding Harry’s attention.

Nate watched her go. With that one small slip, he knew that smile and her emotional distance were only a cover, masking raw feelings just beneath the surface. Something about this case had really struck a chord in her, and Nate wanted to know why.

She had to be intelligence. Maybe something was going on that the CIA hadn’t shared. It was the only explanation he could think of at the moment. Abby hadn’t given away anything but the barest details about herself. She’d been thorough in searching Atwah’s last known locations and had even given a light interrogation to a guard. She had skills. And he wanted the opportunity to know more about her. But, if he was being honest, it was an opportunity that would probably never come.

Within seconds she’d disappeared as completely as Atwah had. Nate didn’t even see her blonde bun bobbing among the crowd. With an inward sigh, he turned his mind back to the mission at hand. Find Atwah and stop the attacks he’d obviously been planning from his cell. All 389 days he’d been there.

And Nate knew he didn’t have much time.

Get your copy of Second Look here

Monday, October 1, 2018

Hawaii Five -O Season Premiere Recap & Review---The Man in the Red Suit!

I am so glad the new season has started! It seems like it has been forever since we've had a new episode. In a nod to the original Hawaii Five-O, this is an homage to the original series premiere called Cocoon (and fairly well done and updated!)

The episode starts out with a man dressed in a red latex wetsuit, floating in a large tank face down, hooked up to breathing apparatus. Creepy. He's being monitored and Wo Fat appears and says, "Bring him to me." (Wo Fat! I've really missed him on this show. He's the only baddie we've ever had that was truly a worthy adversary for McG.) They take the man out and strap him down and when they take the mask off it's Steve. And he's dead. (It's a great scene.) Cut to Steve really in the tank, but of course he's hallucinating Wo Fat. They take him out and go through the same scene of strapping him down and cutting off the mask. Then a guy who sort of looks like a poor man's version of Wo Fat says, "Commander McGarrett, are you ready to talk?" That can't be good. Dun, dun, dun.

Cut to two days earlier. Steve and Junior are digging up the back yard with bags of money all around them. Tani joins them and is curious what they're doing. Apparently Steve and Danny can't deposit the money in a bank because it's Kamekona's partnership money and they would need a lawyer to draw up partnership papers and they can't afford that. So they're just going to bury the money. On a beachfront. On an island. Yeah, it doesn't make a lot of sense to me, but whatever. All I was thinking was for McG's phone to hurry up and ring. And then it did! McG gets a phone call and is visibly affected. He heads out.

There's a dead guy on the beach and he's an old friend of Steve's named Tom Hennessey. (Poor Steve. So many of his old friends are dead now.) Hennessey worked for the CIA and helped him track down Victor Hess back in the day. His clothes were found down the beach neatly folded, but Steve knows Hennessey didn't go for a swim and not come back because his brother was drowned years ago and Hennessey never went in the water. He was murdered.

Back at Hennessey's apartment, a man is going through Hennessey's drawers and ripping pages out of a little black book. He burns them, but hears Danny and Steve coming in so he heads out to the balcony. Steve and Danny can't smell the smoke when they come in, I guess. (On a shallow note, Steve is in my favorite blue shirt. Thank you wardrobe people!) Steve sees the open drawer and goes to the open balcony door. Danny sees the fireplace and heads to that. He's trying to piece back some of the already cool-to-the-touch fragments and make sense of them when they're attacked from behind! Hand to hand combat with one guy and Steve and Danny are getting beat! They take some pretty hard shots, but finally Steve gets the upper hand. Unfortunately, the attacker ends up dead. Steve says to "Book 'em Danno," but the guy's dead, so no dice. DeadGuy has no ID, so they want to call Noelani in, but before they can, someone else is coming into the apartment and they head to the door, guns drawn. It's two CIA officers.

The four of them stand around and discuss the dead guy. His name is Chow and he's a Chinese spy. Male CIA guy gives some attitude and surprise! The agency wants to take over the case, but McG won't stand down on a homicide. Once outside, Danny comments that the woman was flirting or  impressed. Or  . . . he's hooked up with her. McG admits he did hook up with her a long time ago before Cath and right after he got his trident. (I love that they made it clear she was before Cath.) Danny wants Steve to stop living like a monk because apparently he hasn't been on any dates since he broke up with Lynn. (So a Cath mention and he's a single man again. Hmmm....)

And just to remind us that Tani has a story, she's randomly driving around with Junior worrying about if/when she should tell McG the whole I-found-a-gun-at-Adam's-apartment-that-may-be-the-murder-weapon-in-Adam's-sister's-murder. Junior encourages her to get the gun tested to see if it comes back as the murder weapon. (The whole scene just seemed out of place with the Cocoon storyline being so intense. Oh well, back to the good part.)

Noelani found white stuff on Hennessy's eyelids that dentists use to plug up holes after procedures. It was also in Hennessey's nose and ears so they were all sealed up with the white stuff. Poor Steve needs some answers.

Steve remembers back in 2001 when he was in Afghanistan taking fire, and Hennessey came to the rescue. Back in present day, the female CIA agent named Greer is meeting him at an overlook. (Steve is still wearing a blue shirt and it looks fabulous with his eyes and the beautiful scenery in the background.) Steve figured after Morocco she might not want to see him. She assures him that even though they spent two days in a Marakesh flea bag, she didn't expect a proposal. He did write her a note that he'd been deployed which was all true, but his life got complicated after that so he never saw her again. Greer tells him that she ran into Lieutenant Rollins a few years back, so she knows. (Interesting that she knows Cath and we have another Cath mention!) Steve pauses, but then gets down to business and asks what was Hennessey working on? Greer says just routine intel gathering. She asked to be on the case because Hennessey was her friend, too. But then she drops the bomb that four other top agents have been killed recently and there's not a shred of evidence that they weren't accidental, but she thinks they're not accidental at all. There must be a mole in the CIA who is selling them out! What? A mole in the CIA? No way. I bet we can guess who it is . . .

Back at the Chatting Table Jerry is piecing together the fragments from the fireplace and they get the word Cocoon and Steve figures out the other one is SS Arcturus. Since Hennessey's car was found near a commercial pier, he must have been watching the SS Arcturus. Of course, Steve and Danny go out and find the ship, sitting low in the water, with workmen welding on it. Steve says that he has to get on that boat, but while a younger him would "SEAL" his way on, older Steve has an easier way. He pretends to be a worker that's working on ship repairs and when everyone goes home for the day, Steve stays and sneaks around. He opens a hatch and finds the large tank. Takes some pics and leaves. All in a day's work for an "older" SEAL.

Steve and Danny meet with Jonathan Cray, Chief of Pacific Operations of Counter-intelligence. He says that Hennessey and four other agents were interrogated and murdered after Steve helped take down the Russian spy ring. All their enemies are running scared and want to know what the CIA knows. Since the evidence Noelani found on Hennessey's eyes, ears, etc. were on the other victims as well, they conclude the cocoon apparatus Steve saw is a sensory deprivation tank used to get the agents to reveal their investigation. What does that have to do with Steve? Well, back at the Chatting Table, Steve tells the team that Cray will leak info that McG found incriminating evidence at Hennessey's apartment, then McG will allow himself to be captured and interrogated to give misinformation to expose all the communication channels. So, he'll feed them false info that will give the CIA eyes and ears on that network and hopefully shut them down when the time is right. The team is worried about Steve being brainwashed, but he reassures them all that this is going to work.

Back at the SS Arcturus, everyone is in position. Steve goes in alone and gets into a fight before he's stabbed with a needle in his neck. He sees Greer before he passes out. (Totally saw that one coming.) When he comes to, he's strapped down in his form-fitting red rubber suit and doesn't even seem surprised. (I have to wonder, who put him in that skin tight suit? Greer? I think it would be really hard to get on an unconscious person. It's tough enough trying to get on tight leather pants fully conscious! I mean, according to people who wear tight leather pants ...)

Anyway, Greer claims she knows this man. (How? From years and years ago?) She doesn't think he'll tell them anything, but PoorMan'sWoFat rambles on about the brain being like a computer, downloading data from moment you're born and when all input is shut off, eventually a starved computer panics. The brain blanks and is compliant and will answer questions. Huh. Weird. Steve asks Greer to tell him why, but she answers with does it really matter? Next thing we know Steve is floating peacefully in the tank.

Danny and Lou are worrying, and it takes six hours before Steve starts to hallucinate. They pull him out and Steve is answering all the questions, remembering Hennessey's apartment and everything they found. He seems brainwashed and blank. Outside, a black SUV pulls up. Greer comes out and the team recognizes her. She glimpses Tani and Junior's not-so-surreptitious movement (really, guys!) and then sends men out to search the perimeter. A firefight ensues with the ship guys and the team/HPD. Jerry uses the car he's in to run down the guys who have Lou and company pinned. Junior also brings down a crane so the boat can't leave. They all head inside.

PoorMan'sWoFat is trying to figure out what to do and Steve escapes. He's fighting with everyone and comes down to the final fight with PoorMan'sWoFat. They end up in the tank and PoorMan'sWoFat gets the upper hand and is choking/drowning him. Danny shoots him, though, and saves Steve. He gets him out and asks a dazed Steve what's my name? Steve finally says Danny. How long have we known each other? Fifty years. (Haha. Nice nod to the 50th anniversary, though.) Steve says it feels like fifty years and it would take more than brain scrub to make him forget Danny. (Here's my question. Is Steve going home in his red rubber suit? Where are the man's clothes?) The team comes in and confirm they know it was Greer, and she got away. Danny says he hopes this ridiculous plan (of passing along false info) of yours works. Steve tells him it will, but he doesn't look exactly sure.

The end.

Well, there are so many other red rubber suit questions in my mind.


Overall, though, I thought it was a great start to the season and a nice nod to the original. Of course I give it bonus points for a few Cath mentions and the Lynn breakup, I'm really excited to see what direction they're taking Steve's personal life, as well as seeing what Greer will do next. Did you watch? What did you think?

Friday, September 28, 2018

Freebie Friday with FIVE Romance Novels!

Victorine Lieske's Clean Fake Marriage Romance boxed set is being offered for FREE today! If you're looking for a fun romantic weekend read, you can get your copy here

Here's the back copy:

This collection has five clean romances in it. They are full books, not samples or novellas.

Book 1: Accidentally Married
Madison get swindled into pretending to be Jared's girlfriend for a family dinner. When she finds out he lied to her, she gets him back by telling his family they are engaged. A hilarious rom com with a great cast of characters.

Book 2: Reluctantly Married
Megan and Adam have knocked heads for some time. When forced to pretend to date on a TV show, real feelings get in the way. And when they say I do, Megan worries her heart will not be able to take it.

Book 3: Mistakenly Married
Things get a little crazy when Penny accidentally marries the wrong man. Then when he convinces her to stay married just until he gets his inheritance, she agrees. What she didn't expect is for her heart to get involved.

Book 4: Blissfully Married
Sydney pretends to be engaged to help her matchmaking business succeed. Luckily, she's got a fake ring on her finger when her childhood crush walks in the door. Blake stays at arms length from Sydney until he realizes she's been lying to him. He makes it his mission to get her to admit she's not really engaged.

Book 5: Acting Married
When Tara agrees to marry Rick Shade as a publicity stunt, she doesn't expect to fall for him. She can't get her heart involved, she needs stability in her life.

Wednesday, September 26, 2018

Book Review and Giveaway!



After I read the back copy for Love Unscripted, by Tiffany Odekirk, I couldn't wait to read it! Who doesn't love the idea of meeting their actor crush and actually getting to know them?

Evie Jennings is recovering from a broken heart when she meets heartthrob Ridge Dashly who is hiding out from his fans in a girls' bathroom on campus. They have a memorable conversation before she climbs out a window in order to escape the mob and get to class. Ridge is intrigued. Who wouldn't be? Girls don't usually run away from him. But his path crosses Evie's again and eventually they become friends. (And it's a really cute friendship!) There's a chance for romance between them, but both Ridge and Evie are battling issues from their past. Can they get beyond all of that and find their happily-ever-after?

I really loved the author's style and the characters' distinct voices. There were so many cute moments and the romance was sigh-worthy. I liked that the author also tackled issues like anxiety and divorce and did justice to them by realistically portraying them and all the emotions and baggage they carry. There was a good balance with fun and frustration and the characters were so relatable. There is a great supporting cast and we get to catch up with characters from the previous book as well.

The author hits so many emotional beats and I was definitely caught up in the story. I could hardly wait to get back to read it whenever I had a free moment. This was a sweet story of redemption and romance with the backdrop of fame and glamour just to add a twist on Evie and Ridge's journey to love. I really enjoyed this one.

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Here's the back copy:

Evie Jennings doesn’t believe in happily ever after—it’s been a year since moving home to Los Angeles to gather the pieces of her broken heart after her divorce, but she is only going through the motions. That is, until a chance encounter on her college campus brings about an unexpected turn of events: Evie finds herself face-to-face with the heartthrob whose poster decorated the wall of her teenage bedroom. And he’s desperate for her help. Hollywood sensation Ridge Dashly is facing a career crisis—a bad review threatens his A-list status. Desperate to win back the favor of the media and his fans, Ridge reluctantly agrees to enroll in college, never dreaming he’ll meet someone who can see past his fame to his true self. As their paths continue to cross, Evie’s seeming disinterest intrigues Ridge, and the pair form a tentative friendship that slowly grows into something more. But when confronted with the unrelenting paparazzi and the nagging shadows of their pasts, will they follow everyone else’s script or fight for their own happy ending?



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Tuesday, September 25, 2018

A Little Hawaii Five-O News!

Well, I was really excited for the premiere of Hawaii Five-O on Friday night, but the sneak peeks were released and I was so happy because of two things that were said.


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Steve meets up with an old girlfriend and they talk about how he planned to see her again after their weekend together, but he says things got complicated. The old girlfriend tells him she met up with Catherine Rollins later so she knows all about it. The look on Steve's face was priceless! I love that Catherine was mentioned in a positive way, that it was clear this woman was before Catherine's time, and that Steve didn't pick back up with her because of Catherine. I really, really hope we get some McRoll this season. I miss them.


The second interesting thing in the sneak peeks was that we found out Steve and Lynn have broken up and he hasn't dated anyone since their split. I wasn't a big Lynn fan (she never really seemed to fit with him, in my opinion) so I'm not sad she's gone. I was surprised though.

So with those two little spoilers I am even MORE excited to watch on Friday. What about you? What premiere are you excited to watch?

Monday, September 24, 2018

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Friday, September 21, 2018

My New Book Cover! What Do You Think?



I have a new romantic suspense coming out soon and I can hardly wait for you to read it! It's called Second Look and it's the fourth book in my Griffin Force series. I am so excited to share this one! I think it's been one of my favorite to write. 

Here's the cover and back copy. What do you think? *bites fingernails*

When the most wanted terrorist in the world escapes from a high security prison, Nate Hughes is part of the task force sent to recapture him. During the mission, he meets Abby, and she seems like every other intelligence officer he’s ever worked with---focused, capable, and confident. Nate assumes she’s one of the good guys, but when her past is revealed, her loyalties are called into question. Could she have turned against the country she once held dear?

Nate isn’t sure.

With a terrorist attack imminent, Abby seems to be the only person in a position to help them stop it before it happens, but if she is a traitor, all is lost. Nate must make a choice to either trust her or turn her in---and the wrong decision would clear the path for the largest attack on freedom the world has ever seen.

And time is running out.