tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4421706587311875668.post7348953741697038373..comments2023-10-14T06:54:41.793-06:00Comments on Julie Coulter Bellon: First Page FridayJulie Coulter Bellonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07695605817809301518noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4421706587311875668.post-86196172371783249762013-03-06T12:32:45.394-07:002013-03-06T12:32:45.394-07:00I liked the "twitchy bits" line, actuall...I liked the "twitchy bits" line, actually. It allowed my imnagination to take over and I drew my own conclusions about what was on the plate.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12822058960984480725noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4421706587311875668.post-78634569651804442712013-02-22T19:09:12.097-07:002013-02-22T19:09:12.097-07:00I love the colorful bird-like creatures the humans...I love the colorful bird-like creatures the humans mingle with. Wild and wonderful. It will take a while to build this world. <br /><br />Great first page.Debra Erferthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08239033133090036826noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4421706587311875668.post-58166420189750419432013-02-22T14:25:21.312-07:002013-02-22T14:25:21.312-07:00My favorite part of this was the whimsical nature ...My favorite part of this was the whimsical nature of it. The food and the feathers and the atmosphere all combined to present a scene that I thought was very fun. <br /><br />The MC is clearly not frightened by the weirdness, but delighted. =)Jon Spellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13283068961865370674noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4421706587311875668.post-56541418681566987122013-02-22T11:49:01.130-07:002013-02-22T11:49:01.130-07:00Thank you so much for the feedback!! I really appr...Thank you so much for the feedback!! I really appreciate your taking the time. I attended that very panel by Craig Nybo, and am planning on going through all of my scenes to revise based on his points. Thank you for pointing out how to apply the tools, as well as for all of the other suggestions.<br /><br />Again, thank you so very, very much. I will get in there with my scalpel and refine, refine, refine.Chris vhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02920938015472296076noreply@blogger.com