tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4421706587311875668.post6773555211923558371..comments2023-10-14T06:54:41.793-06:00Comments on Julie Coulter Bellon: First Page FridayJulie Coulter Bellonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07695605817809301518noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4421706587311875668.post-50075334283727940322011-11-07T18:55:42.843-07:002011-11-07T18:55:42.843-07:00"Cur" also means a mongrel, feral dog, a..."Cur" also means a mongrel, feral dog, and that's the first thing that popped into my head on reading this. <br /><br />But, yay for dystopian sci-fi! <br />I really don't think there can be too many of these :)Ginahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02739830983426330836noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4421706587311875668.post-87377732342092136962011-11-05T14:46:07.782-06:002011-11-05T14:46:07.782-06:00Yeah...I agree with miss Pearson. Great exposition...Yeah...I agree with miss Pearson. Great exposition here and comments are intelligent.Michael Offutt, Phantom Readerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10557969104886174930noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4421706587311875668.post-85358038666328789802011-11-05T05:20:09.270-06:002011-11-05T05:20:09.270-06:00Eek. This is disturbing, and very creepy. Great jo...Eek. This is disturbing, and very creepy. Great job!Sarah Tokeleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13273148070092101085noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4421706587311875668.post-49777883798249267792011-11-04T15:27:14.040-06:002011-11-04T15:27:14.040-06:00Melanie,
Need a beta reader? Or is this ready to ...Melanie,<br /><br />Need a beta reader? Or is this ready to publish? It sounds like it's all ready for print, but I'm always looking for a chance to pre-read a good manuscript. I love sci-fi. Just a thought. No pressure. <br /><br />In case you might, my email is ...<br /><br />debraerfert at yahoo dot comDebra Erferthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08239033133090036826noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4421706587311875668.post-70071356636997384542011-11-04T14:50:09.748-06:002011-11-04T14:50:09.748-06:00Thank you, Debra! :-) It's more sci fi, not ...Thank you, Debra! :-) It's more sci fi, not dystopian.Melanie Goldmundhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00270135660110676225noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4421706587311875668.post-30201682479705921142011-11-04T12:31:30.622-06:002011-11-04T12:31:30.622-06:00Eeeps!! This is positively thrilling! I don't ...Eeeps!! This is positively thrilling! I don't know if its more dystopian or just a great sci-fi. What's the difference? All science fictions, or at least most need to be set in a different kind of world, don't they? Love the concept. Very vivid writing. I don't look up the meaning of names, so I didn't have the problem with Vero's name sounding male.Debra Erferthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08239033133090036826noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4421706587311875668.post-89801306507780827992011-11-04T10:11:24.061-06:002011-11-04T10:11:24.061-06:00Thanks for your comments, Ms. Shreditor! I'll...Thanks for your comments, Ms. Shreditor! I'll take them all to heart, especially the part about the world-building.Melanie Goldmundhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00270135660110676225noreply@blogger.com