tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4421706587311875668.post6394256925402736516..comments2023-10-14T06:54:41.793-06:00Comments on Julie Coulter Bellon: First Page Friday & Ashes Ashes is Available on Kindle!Julie Coulter Bellonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07695605817809301518noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4421706587311875668.post-71575828055377889252013-05-03T15:50:58.447-06:002013-05-03T15:50:58.447-06:00Oh, Julie, I've posted my review of Ashes Ashe...Oh, Julie, I've posted my review of Ashes Ashes on Goodreads, Amazon, and also on my humble blog, debraerfert@blogspot.com and then Tweeted the postings. Your book rocks! Debra Erferthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08239033133090036826noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4421706587311875668.post-76347919310177097862013-05-03T15:48:20.507-06:002013-05-03T15:48:20.507-06:00I love Great Danes. They have so much character. A...I love Great Danes. They have so much character. And Henry, so retrained, (I know he's big enough he could eat right off the table) sounds wonderful. Debra Erferthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08239033133090036826noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4421706587311875668.post-69016938176543181782013-05-03T14:22:24.661-06:002013-05-03T14:22:24.661-06:00Thanks for your comments. This is page one of the ...Thanks for your comments. This is page one of the second book in the series. You did page one of the first book a couple of weeks ago (large stinky dog charging out of the closet and planting his front feet on Kell's shoulders). That book came out last September. This one came out in November. The comment about Kyle being handsome is gratuitous, yeah, I can admit that. I like thinking about his bad handsome self, so I think I sub-consciously threw that in there. Kell is usually melodramatic and all three of these people are pretty well fleshed out (I think) in the rest of the book. And, yes, Henry the dog is the heart of the story. He and Ann are my main characters. The beginning of each chapter has what I thought was an appropriate quote. when I got your comments on my other first page, I made and submitted revisions and had them in mind when I sent in a revision for the second book. I did try to make sure that this second in the series could stand alone, in case people read this one and not the first book, but these four characters were all well established in A Little Hair of the Dog. I'm working in book 3 and will probably be sending its first page on soon! Thanks for the help.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12822058960984480725noreply@blogger.com