tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4421706587311875668.post4254811917879181455..comments2023-10-14T06:54:41.793-06:00Comments on Julie Coulter Bellon: First Page FridayJulie Coulter Bellonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07695605817809301518noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4421706587311875668.post-43451006657653137592013-02-01T12:44:17.542-07:002013-02-01T12:44:17.542-07:00Ryan! I saw that you were doing a book signing at ...Ryan! I saw that you were doing a book signing at Costco, but the line was too long and I have this fear of crowds, otherwise I sure would have come to meet you! <br /><br />Can't wait for your book to be released! <br /><br />XOXOXO<br /><br />-- Helen<br /><br />(P.S. Happy Birthday!)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4421706587311875668.post-47542435059088847792013-02-01T12:16:20.818-07:002013-02-01T12:16:20.818-07:00I hope Ryan doesn't feel like you're stalk...I hope Ryan doesn't feel like you're stalking him, Jon. <br /><br />Ms. Shreditor's comments and suggestions are great. Ryan, like most writers, get caught up in the momentum of the scene and let small errors slip by. I'm sure his critique partners will find them and will gleefully point them out before he submits his manuscript to any literary agent or publisher. <br /><br />I've learned a lot from this first page, too. Thank you, Ms. Shreditor, and Julie. Debra Erferthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08239033133090036826noreply@blogger.com