tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4421706587311875668.post3628590965884356086..comments2023-10-14T06:54:41.793-06:00Comments on Julie Coulter Bellon: First Page FridayJulie Coulter Bellonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07695605817809301518noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4421706587311875668.post-2579454716629683612013-03-23T21:38:51.550-06:002013-03-23T21:38:51.550-06:00Thank you, so much, for your review and your helpf...Thank you, so much, for your review and your helpful comments! Thank you for pointing out that I didn't introduce my MC (narrator). Easily fixed. I'm going through a final (I hope) revision that I will submit to createspace as soon as it's done and I will include that. And since "intestinal" doesn't mean that much to me, I might just take that out too. The character actually does usually speak that way, so it might not be too out of order for her to say it that way. I actually didn't put a Wiki paragraph at the beginning of every chapter but I did think about it. I don't realy remember now why I didn't do it! Should've, now that I think about it. Anyway, thank you for your input!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12822058960984480725noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4421706587311875668.post-83720632561789792812013-03-22T16:14:57.913-06:002013-03-22T16:14:57.913-06:00Thank you so much for your critique and comments! ...Thank you so much for your critique and comments! They are much appreciated.Jane Mariehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15503008712277275035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4421706587311875668.post-32451022746100326372013-03-22T15:56:40.397-06:002013-03-22T15:56:40.397-06:00I've often wondered about "the hair of th...I've often wondered about "the hair of the dog" meaning. There are so many other little sayings that we hear but never really know the root meaning to, that could be fun to know about. Cute angle. I liked this first page.Debra Erferthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08239033133090036826noreply@blogger.com